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9.9 Chapters 85-86, Hawkins Timeline and Distance

9.9 Chapters 85-86, Hawkins Timeline and Distance

  • Chapters 85-86 lock that Steve, Anya, and the Hawkins group are not only a few hours behind the convoy, but following a relatively cold Ronance/Raven trail, with signs worn by rain, mud, water, and time.
  • The delay is not caused by Steve's lack of desire or ability to arrive. It comes from his repeated decision to bring all the children safely: Max with the injured leg, Mike, Will, Dustin, Lucas, Erica, and Eleven, together with the heavy, vulnerable van.
  • Eleven continues to be written without powers, with sharp spatial/material sight. In Chapters 85-86, Anya, Steve, and Layla actually listen to her when she identifies mud, weak bridges, tracks, weight, and vehicle routes.
  • By the end of Chapter 86, Hawkins is physically close to the convoy's route and leaves a sign of its own, but the reunion does not happen yet. The return remains for the opening of Part 4.
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